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题目是In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship
between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals
can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of
personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or
fail according to their individual merits.What is your view of the relationship
between equality and personal success?
范文：
In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same
rights and the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve
more in this kind of society.
Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I
believe that all children should have access to free schooling, and higher
education should be either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue
a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher
education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have
access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better
prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of
some but harm the prospects of others.
I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with
people’s freedom to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that
people lose their motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail.
On the contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work
hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair
society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted
their opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to
demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked
in favour of those from privileged backgrounds.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between
equality and personal success.
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